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History of York City F.C.

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I'm looking to see how this article could be further improved. The main problem is the prose which could use a good cleaning up, and so I have added it to the requests at WP:LOCE, but I'd like to get suggestions from the wider community. The ultimate goal is WP:FA, which will help contribute to York City F.C.'s push to WP:FT. Thanks, Mattythewhite (talk) 16:21, 14 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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