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List of UEFA club competition winners

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I've listed this article for peer review because this is the parent article for the featured topic I am trying to create. Hopefully this peer review will iron out any kinks this list has, Thanks in advance for your comments NapHit (talk) 18:41, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Foremost, I had to spend a few second understanding what do the CWC/UIC/SL mean. I suggest linking all the title entries in the table and perhaps even delete the key, but spell out the names using a smaller format.

I don't understand why you had problems understanding the acronyms when the key explains what they mean, surely you would read this before you looked at the table

Write defunct by the CWC title.

No need it says in the lead it is defunct

I would prefer seeing the years of the titles right beneath the number.

This would make the table pointless, the idea is to list the number of titles won, not when they were won, if you want to know the years the were won, go on the respective winners list

Juventus and Milan need to be specified that are Italian.

Done

In the intro I would list all the teams that have 10 trophies.

Done

Same for nations.

Done

I have problems equating UIC titles with the other ones. Perhaps add another entry with only the major titles? (CL+UC+SC?)

It is a UEFA competition there is no reason why it should not be included

Perhaps spell out how many teams won 4 of the trophies, 3 of them, 2 of them, and any of them.

Not sure what you mean

Might be relevant to say which are the countries with the most number of teams that won any trophies.

That's mentioned in the lead

Perhaps add a field in the second table with this number.

Not sure what you mean

"This table lists the total number of titles won by managers of each nationality." This is extreeeeemly confusing. Is this list supposed to show club winners or managers of clubs that won?

Whoops, fixed

Might be neat to say how many of the ~55 UEFA nations have won any major title.

Don't think it's necessary

You should merge the two types of refs and clearly link the general ones to the relevant table entries.

They don't need merging the specific refs are used to reference claims not victories

I believe at least some of the refs have dates clearly listed.

Included these

The title (1) seems wrong; (2) seems awkward/hard to read. Try instead "List of club winners of UEFA competitions" or "List of UEFA competitions winners"

I think it's fine as it is, changing the title to either of these would imply the inclusion of international competitions, this way it is made clear that it is only club competitions included

WOOOOW! How is this list different or better than UEFA competition records???

Because it focuses on one specific subject, and others more detail, plus that list focuses on records, and therefore the table in that list should be removed and a link placed to this list. NapHit (talk) 16:02, 14 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

But the listst there are way more comprehensive! I seriously do not think this article is needed. Nergaal (talk) 17:37, 14 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Nergaal (talk) 03:52, 14 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This list is clearly incomplete as that in the competition records has more entries. Nergaal (talk) 17:41, 14 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No that list has inaccurate entries, concerning the UEFA Intertoto Cup, only victories since 1995 are included as this is when the competition came under UEFA sanction, the records list contains victories from before 1995. It also includes the Intercontinental Cup which is not a UEFA competition NapHit (talk) 17:57, 14 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, but it still adds too little and I believe that all the information can be easily integrated in the competition records one. Anyways, I will let the community decide weather it is worth having a separate list for this. Nergaal (talk) 18:48, 14 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]