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This Copy Editing Backlog Elimination Drive was a one-month-long effort of the Guild of Copy Editors to reduce the backlog of articles that require copy editing; those carrying the {{copyedit}} tag or listed on the GOCE Requests page. It began on January 1, 2015, 00:00 (UTC) and ended on January 31, 2015, 23:59 (UTC). The goals of this drive were:

  • to reduce the backlog by as many articles as possible, with a focus on the earliest-tagged articles (August, September and October 2013)
  • to complete all requests on the GOCE Requests page from November 2014.

Drive participants earned barnstar awards based on the number of articles—and the word counts of the articles—they copy edit. Articles from the Requests page count towards your total; these are generally higher-quality articles than those tagged with {{copy edit}}. You will receive a bonus score of 50% over the article's word count for articles that were tagged with {{copyedit}} in August, September or October 2013, and articles listed on the Requests page. Awards will be given out once the drive has finished.

The drive was open to all; you don't have to be a member of the Guild of Copy Editors to participate. You must, however, be competent in your use of English grammar, spelling and punctuation. We strongly advise you to read Wikipedia's guide to basic copy editing before you begin working. If you're unsure about spelling, grammar or punctuation, consult the Wikipedia Manual of Style. Skilled use of English is especially important for articles listed on the Requests page.

Drives are under the purview of the Guild's coordinators. The drive's lead coordinator is Miniapolis (talk), who is assisted by Philg88 (talk), Jonesey95 (talk), and Biblioworm (talk). If you have any questions, leave a message on the drive's talk page.

For brief instructions on how to record your work, see below. For full instructions, visit the main drive page.

Full instructions, tips, and awards

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Full instructions for participants, tips, help for new copy editors, useful tags, and details of the many barnstars available for the drive can be found on the main drive page. Please read this page carefully before you begin. To sign up, please use the form in the Signing up section below.

Progress

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Leaderboard

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  • Gold Star Award Leaderboard
1 2 3 4 5
Total
Articles
Tdslk (48) Lfstevens (38) Jonesey95 (23)
Dthomsen8 (23)
Miniapolis (22)
Total
Words[n 1]
Lfstevens (108,429) Miniapolis (71,203) Jonesey95 (52,243) Tdslk (23,157) Biblioworm (14,872)
5k+
Articles[n 2]
Lfstevens (8) Miniapolis (6) Jonesey95 (5) Tdslk (1)
Deadbeef (1)
Biblioworm (1)
Oldest
Articles[n 3]
Lfstevens (30) Jonesey95 (15) Miniapolis (13) Tdslk (11) Dhtwiki (5)
Longest
Article[n 1][n 4]
Lfstevens (13,425) Miniapolis (13,237) Jonesey95 (10,611) Deadbeef (5,879) Tdslk (5,864)
  1. ^ a b Please include only the actual word count, without the 50% bonus for requests and older articles.
  2. ^ Number of articles of 5,000 words or more. An article of 10K+ words counts as 2, of 15K+ as 3, and so on.
  3. ^ Oldest articles are those tagged in Aug/Sep/Oct 2013.
  4. ^ The number of words in the longest article you copy edited. Only one entry for any editor.

Progress chart

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Graphs of daily progress
Progress Chart
Date
  • Aug/Sep/Oct
  • old articles
  • Outstanding
  • tags
  • Change since
  • previous day
[N 1]
  • Change since
  • beginning
[N 1]
31 December 2014 212 2,198
1 January 2015 193 2,188 Positive decrease 10 Positive decrease 10
2 January 2015 188 2,186 Positive decrease  2 Positive decrease 12
3 January 2015 181 2,171 Positive decrease 15 Positive decrease 27
4 January 2015 173 2,166 Positive decrease  5 Positive decrease 32
5 January 2015 168 2,182 Negative increase  16 Positive decrease 16
6 January 2015 164 2,176 Positive decrease  6 Positive decrease 22
7 January 2015 163 2,189 Negative increase  13 Positive decrease  9
8 January 2015 156 2,195 Negative increase  6 Positive decrease  3
9 January 2015 148 2,196 Negative increase  1 Positive decrease  2
10 January 2015 142 2,205 Negative increase  9 Negative increase  7
11 January 2015 137 2,204 Positive decrease  1 Negative increase  6
12 January 2015 130 2,201 Positive decrease  3 Negative increase  3
13 January 2015 125 2,197 Positive decrease  4 Positive decrease  1
14 January 2015 121 2,198 Negative increase  1 Steady  0
15 January 2015 118 2,197 Positive decrease  1 Positive decrease  1
16 January 2015 112 2,191 Positive decrease  6 Positive decrease  7
17 January 2015 111 2,184 Positive decrease  7 Positive decrease 14
18 January 2015 94 2,182 Positive decrease  2 Positive decrease 16
19 January 2015 89 2,188 Negative increase  6 Positive decrease 10
20 January 2015 87 2,185 Positive decrease  3 Positive decrease 13
21 January 2015 81 2,177 Positive decrease  8 Positive decrease 21
22 January 2015 80 2,182 Negative increase  5 Positive decrease 16
23 January 2015 74 2,179 Positive decrease  3 Positive decrease 19
24 January 2015 71 2,190 Negative increase  11 Positive decrease  8
25 January 2015 63 2,189 Positive decrease  1 Positive decrease  9
26 January 2015 57 2,190 Negative increase  1 Positive decrease  8
27 January 2015 55 2,183 Positive decrease  7 Positive decrease 15
28 January 2015 51 2,174 Positive decrease  9 Positive decrease 24
29 January 2015 50 2,179 Negative increase  5 Positive decrease 19
30 January 2015 47 2,176 Positive decrease  3 Positive decrease 22
31 January 2015 47 2,186 Negative increase  10 Positive decrease 12
  1. ^ a b Change refers only to outstanding tags.

Reviewing

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GOCE coordinators and other experienced Guild members will carry out random checks to ensure that copy edits are of a satisfactory standard. If you are willing to help with reviewing, please sign up below.

10% of each participant's copy edits from the backlog should be checked, and all copy edits from the Requests page should be reviewed, time permitting. Please choose articles at random and do not inspect your own copy edits. After checking articles, place a {{checked}} template after the article on the listing and sign your username with four tildes (~~~~). If a rough consensus finds that a copy edit is not of an acceptable standard, the tag will be re-added and the editor will be deducted a penalty of 1,200 words plus the word count of the reviewed article. The reviewer may give advice on how the edit could have been improved without penalizing the editor. Please raise any questions on the Coordinators' talk page.

Reviewers sign-up

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Signing up

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This drive has concluded. Follow the "Drives" link at the top of this page to sign up for the next (or current) drive.

Totals

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How to record articles you have copy edited:

  • Remove any extant {{copyedit}} tags from the article.
  • When you sign up, your section is automatically populated with # {{Working}} [[]] () and # {{Completed}} [[]] ():
    • Article titles go in wikilinks [[]]. List the article's full title, not an abbreviated version.
    • Article word counts go in round brackets (): use this script to get the page's word count.
  • Place articles you're working on on the {{Working}} line. When you've finished your copy edit, change {{Working}} to {{Completed}}
  • If the article is from the GOCE Requests page, place *R after the word count. If it was tagged in August, September or October 2013, place *O after the word count.
  • Place any comments between the article title and the word count.
  • Do not list articles on which you have placed {{GOCEreviewed}} instead of copy editing them, or which needed no copy editing.
  • Do not add the 50% bonus for Requests or Oldest articles—a coordinator will apply the bonuses after the drive is over.
  • If you want your work checked, you can request it on the drive talk page.

Properly completed records look like this in the edit window:

# {{Completed}} [[Dark chocolate]] (yummy!) (1,234) *O

and like this on the rendered page:

1.  Completed Dark chocolate (yummy!) (1,234) *O
Article list
  1.  Completed Ramon Sender (634) *O checkY Checked. --Biblioworm 00:47, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  2.  Completed Bunny Walters (241) *O
  3.  Completed Death of Joan Robinson Hill (6254) *R
  4.  Completed Joan Robinson Hill (9753) *R
  5.  Completed Ignat Kaneff (512) *O
  6.  Completed Cynthia Ann Parker (2,081) *R
  7.  Completed Welcome to the Jungle (Neon Jungle song) (2,386) *R
  8.  Completed Magna Carta (10,611) *R
  9.  Completed The Gold Rush (1,600) *R
  10.  Completed Soldier's Heart (Gary Paulsen novel) (1,281) *O
  11.  Completed Kavichandran Alexander (599) *O
  12.  Completed List of Rhode Island International Horror Film Festival selections (933) *O
  13.  Completed List of heritage sites in Victoria West (word count of descriptions) (5,466) *O
  14.  Completed Bob Rowe (736) *O
  15.  Completed Hervé Biausser (393) *O
  16.  Completed Giancarlo Cannito (700) *O
  17.  Completed Ingress Abbey (737)
  18.  Completed The Grand Prior's Award (502) *O
  19.  Completed Mohanlal filmography (87) *O
  20.  Completed Manolo Escobar (436) *O
  21.  Completed Massimo Gabutti (1,226) *O
  22.  Completed Django Unchained (4,302) *R
  23.  Completed Rawal Mallinath (773) *O
  • Total articles: 23
  • Total words: 52,243
  • Rollover words: 1,519
Article list
  1.  Completed 2011 White House shooting (1360) *R
  2.  Completed 2014 oil spill on Sundarbans (945) *R
  3.  Completed Capon Chapel (2900) *R
  4.  Completed One World Trade Center (only counting the part copy edited during January) (5008) *R
  5.  Completed Ladislaus I of Hungary (3693) *R
  6.  Completed Murder of Kylie Maybury (218) *R
  7.  Completed Bolokhoveni (748) *R
  • Total articles: 7
  • Total words: 14872
  • Rollover words: 7901
Article list
  1.  Completed Tambling Wildlife Nature Conservation (list) (1,126) *O
  2.  Completed Valley View (Romney, West Virginia) (3,948) *R
  3.  Completed Traditional games of Korea (1,884) *O
  4.  Completed Sonic the Hedgehog (1991 video game) (3,339) *R
  5.  Completed Kadir Timergazin (lists) (837) *O
  6.  Completed Black Canary (list) (4,707) *R
  7.  Completed Queen of the Demonweb Pits (1,054) *O
  8.  Completed The Edukators (2,765) *R
  9.  Completed Yamla Pagla Deewana 2 (list) (1,658) *O
  10.  Completed Camas pocket gopher (3,679) *R
  11.  Completed Constituent Assembly of India (1,458) *O
  12.  Completed Sam and Diane#Reception (1,510) *R
  13.  Completed International reactions to the Ghouta chemical attack (lists) (5,766) *O
  14.  Completed Tunnel Vision (song) (2,399) *R
  15.  Completed Atelier Iris 2: The Azoth of Destiny (lists) (5,212) *O
  16.  Completed 2013–14 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team (5,240) *R
  17.  Completed Centre de Documentació i Museu de les Arts Escèniques (list) (1,491) *O
  18.  Completed Operation Backstop (1,828) *R
  19.  Completed Jhansi Ki Rani (TV series) (section) (645) *O
  20.  Completed La Pucelle: Tactics (list) (2,149) *O
  21.  Completed List of All My Children characters (list) (13,237) *O
  22.  Completed List of M jak miłość characters (Mostowiak family) (5,271) *O
  • Total articles: 22
  • Total words: 71,203
  • Rollover words: 10,061
Article list
  1.  Completed Vazken Andréassian In copy editing this article, I found it has multiple issues. I couldn't do much with citations and references because most of the references were in Armenian or French. I added some "Needs citation" markers. The Personal section requires more information. For example, a grandson is named, but Andréassian's wife and children are not. I'm adding comments to the article's Talk page. (472) *O
  • Total articles: 1
  • Total words: 472
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed Johannes Hint (1093)
  2.  Completed Ahmad Dhani (1604) *O
  3.  Completed Oliena (3101) *O
  4.  Completed Julius Lothar Meyer (878) *O
  5.  Completed Sampada Malla (843)
  • Total articles: 5
  • Total words: 7519
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed Warner Bros. (8,814)
  2.  Completed Jean-André Deluc (1034) *O checkY Checked. No outstanding issues. --Biblioworm 01:41, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  3.  Completed Electromagnetic radiation (7,844)
  4.  Completed Fatal Fury (series) (1140) *O
  5.  Completed The Great Day of Girona (3311) *O
  6.  Completed 1973 oil crisis (7,035)
  7.  Completed Himitsu Sentai Gorenger (3003) *O
  8.  Completed Vilnius University Faculty of Communication (1809) *O
  9.  Completed Otumfuo Nana Osei Tutu II (346) *O
  10.  Completed Fall of Mazari Sharif (1616) *O
  11.  Completed Partition of Bosnia and Herzegovina (1623)
  12.  Completed Oriental Development Company (737) *O
  13.  Completed Caltech 101 (559) *O
  14.  Completed Mamerto Natividad (2100) *O
  15.  Completed Lee Moyer (908) *O
  16.  Completed Protection and indemnity insurance (840) *O
  17.  Completed Charles César de Fay de La Tour-Maubourg (943) *O
  18.  Completed DeKalb County School District (350) *O
  19.  Completed Kludge (1982) *O
  20.  Completed Allegations of misappropriations related to the Iraq War (353) *O
  21.  Completed Dalit (8,012)
  22.  Completed University of California Davis Graduate Studies (281) *O
  23.  Completed Universidad Tecnológica de Tula-Tepeji (662) *O
  24.  Completed Lancia Ypsilon (3407) *O
  25.  Completed The Prisoner (2009 miniseries) (1168) *O
  26.  Completed Jim Calarco (399) *O
  27.  Completed Elbow (band) (2585) *O
  28.  Completed Mikhail Shuisky (baritone) (2133) *O
  29.  Completed Dimitri Logothetis *O (827) *O
  30.  Completed Cyndi Lauper (6,148)
  31.  Completed Nagoya (4160) *O
  32.  Completed Tevye (797) *O
  33.  Completed Hyundai Elantra (2715) *O
  34.  Completed John Mayer (5,159)
  35.  Completed Cádiz Cortes (1213) *O
  36.  Completed Canzo (8,956) *O
  37.  Completed Thai Pongal (1589) *O
  38.  Completed Richelieu-class battleship (13,425)
  39.  Completed Maglev (7,823)
  • Total articles: 39
  • Total words: 116,252
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
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  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed APCOA Parking (442) Checked
  2.  Completed All About That Bass (5,879) *R Checked
  3.  Completed Barrackpore (2,317) *O Checked
  4.  Completed Pablo Illanes (540) *O Checked
  5.  Completed Rashid Askari (354) *O
  6.  Completed Ellenabad (349) *O
  • Total articles: 6
  • Total words: 9,881
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed Mar'ashi Najafi library (word count = rnd(10,573 B / 5 B/W), as prose count (468 W) far under-counted what I did) (2115) *O
  2.  Completed Pallithode (1717) *O
  3.  Completed Shinobido: Way of the Ninja (including lists) (4067) *O
  4.  Completed Wild Arms 3 (including lists) (1663) *O
  5.  Completed ZanZarah: The Hidden Portal (including lists) (1756) *O
  • Total articles: 5
  • Total words: 11318
  • Rollover words: 16808.5
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
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  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed New Washermenpet (71)
  2.  Completed Plectroglyphidodon sindonis (129)
  3.  Completed Temsalet (51)
  4.  Completed Sigurd Hammer (191)
  5.  Completed Pharmacological torture (264)
  6.  Completed Belize–Mexico border (748) *O
  7.  Completed Iran–South Korea football rivalry (110) *O
  8.  Completed Debi Makhsoospuri (127) *O
  9.  Completed Margaret Castro (195)
  10.  Completed The Falling Soldier (880) *O
  11.  Completed Ove Høegh-Guldberg (537)
  12.  Completed Lebanese immigration to Mexico section (103)
  13.  Completed Boko Haram (5,864)
  14.  Completed Fram Kino (742) *O
  15.  Completed 2014 Sweden mosques arson attack series (265)
  16.  Completed Song Kwang-won (167)
  17.  Completed Manora, Washim (57)
  18.  Completed Xochimilco Ecological Park and Plant Market (2275)
  19.  Completed Abdul Basith (volleyball) (108)
  20.  Completed Dávid Bélaváry (172)
  21.  Completed De Fontaine Memorial (592)
  22.  Completed Marc Ongley (452) *O
  23.  Completed Ben Greenhalgh (342) *O
  24.  Completed Athina Rachel Tsangari (510) *O
  25.  Completed Capitan Tifus (350) *O
  26.  Completed Broom & Groom (583) *O
  27.  Completed Igorrr (353) *O
  28.  Completed Nicolaus Adriani (52)
  29.  Completed Karnoo (50)
  30.  Completed Shenyang section (90)
  31.  Completed Grand Tack Hypothesis (479)
  32.  Completed Margaret K. Butler (667)
  33.  Completed Yoshida dormitory, Kyoto University (174)
  34.  Completed João Henrique Ulrich Júnior (94)
  35.  Completed Example-based machine translation (515)
  36.  Completed Hiro Kanagawa (142)
  37.  Completed Hispanic–Latino naming dispute (1807)
  38.  Completed Tampomas II (1429)
  39.  Completed Tatacoa Desert (453)
  40.  Completed Ruksin (76)
  41.  Completed Rukumkot (264)
  42.  Completed Raoul I of Lusignan (206)
  43.  Completed Inebolu Shipyard (147)
  44.  Completed Osteochilus lini (28)
  45.  Completed Osteochilus spilurus (22)
  46.  Completed Osteochilus melanopleurus (69)
  47.  Completed Osteochilus microcephalus (34)
  48.  Completed Bete Amhara (121)
  • Total articles: 48
  • Total words: 23,157
  • Rollover words: 437.5
Article list
  1.  Completed Cranes (beverage) (44)
  2.  Completed Fast4 Tennis (166)
  3.  Completed Greek frigate Hydra (F-452) (263) *O
  4.  Completed Gupis (Goopechh valley) (183)
  5.  Completed Hazipur Nasir Uddin Memorial High School (87)
  6.  Completed Holston High School (67)
  7.  Completed Incheon Namdong Asiad Rugby Field (28)
  8.  Completed Khanom phing (184)
  9.  Completed Kurz ibn Jabir al-Fihri (137}
  10.  Completed L'Atalante basin (298)
  11.  Completed Ladies Learning Code (93) Checked. – Jonesey95 (talk) 05:41, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  12.  Completed List of egg dishes (84)
  13.  Completed Lukovo pole hydro power project (549)
  14.  Completed Malibu Rum (282) Checked. – Jonesey95 (talk) 05:41, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  15.  Completed Narsakkapalli (45) Checked. Could have used a bit more work to check unfamiliar words. – Jonesey95 (talk) 05:41, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  16.  Completed Order of Chosen Friends (468)
  17.  Completed Sarojini Vidhyalaya Matric Higher Secondary School (74)
  18.  Completed Sri shariputhra maha vidyalaya (38)
  19.  Completed Summit Lake, Alaska (142) Checked. Improvements. A bit more could have been even better. – Jonesey95 (talk) 05:41, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  20.  Completed Uijeongbu (356) *O
  21.  Completed Utoy Village (526)
  22.  Completed Vukan's Gospel (66) Checked. Needed more. – Jonesey95 (talk) 05:41, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  23.  Completed Wrocław Town Hall (983) *O
  • Total articles: 23
  • Total words: 4000+
  • Rollover words: 2280
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
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  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
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  • Total words: 0
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  1.  Completed [[]] ()
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  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed Icewind Dale (1,910) *O
  2.  Completed The Krion Conquest (907) *O
  • Total articles: 2
  • Total words: 2,817
Article list
  1.  Completed Major Accident (547) *O
  • Total articles: 1
  • Total words: 547
  • Rollover words: 700
Article list
  1.  Completed Shared universe (1869) *O
  2.  Completed Logical framework approach (885) *O
  • Total articles: 2
  • Total words: 2745
Article list
  1.  Working Dungeons & Dragons: Dragonshard (1253) *O  Not done. Needs more work, e.g. the adjective "single player" should be "single-player"; "is billed" should be "was billed". Serial comma consistency is needed. – Jonesey95 (talk) 03:15, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  2.  Working Protection and indemnity insurance (840) *O
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed Dragons of the Dwarven Depths (1300) *O
  2.  Completed Petr Mrázek (841) *O Checked
  3.  Completed Poochakkal (450) *O
  4.  Completed Surabhi (theatre group) (850) *O
  5.  Completed Guillaume Lekeu (942) *O
  • Total articles: 5
  • Total words: 4383
  • Rollover words: 6600.5
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
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  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed Illegal drug trade (6322)
  2.  Completed Colross (2345) *R Checked
  • Total articles: 2
  • Total words: 8687
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0

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Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
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  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed Giancarlo Agazzi (113)
  2.  Completed Adavilo Abhimanyudu (353)
  3.  Completed ANUCDE (75)
  4.  Completed Bachelor of Science in Aquatic Resources and Technology (140) Checked
  5.  Completed Samantha Baines (496)
  6.  Completed Badichowdi (106)
  • Total articles: 6
  • Total words: 1,283
  • Rollover words: 2,034
Article list
  1.  Completed [[]] ()
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
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  1.  Completed Nanjing Lukou International Airport (670) Checked
  2.  Working [[]] ()
  • Total articles: 1
  • Total words: 652
Article list
  1.  Completed Horní Suchá (2202) *O Checked
  2.  Completed Soulcalibur IV (1883) *O
  • Total articles: 2
  • Total words: 4085
Article list
  1.  Completed Bhume Naach of Kham people in Nepal (846)
  • Total articles: 1
  • Total words: 846
Article list
  1.  Completed 2009 Hermosillo daycare center fire (1651)
  • Total articles: 0
  • Total words: 0
Article list
  1.  Completed Loïs Andréa (355)
  2.  Completed Nut rage incident (856) *R
  • Total articles: 2
  • Total words: 1211