Talk:Dennis Havig

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Review: October 30, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:57, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 17:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

Add "(NFL)" to the lead.
- Done.
There are a number of duplicate links in the body: lettered, senior, and linebacker
- Removed.
Reference #3 mentions that he is Mormon, this may be notable enough to add to his bio somewhere
- I was thinking it might be worth adding too; but I am unsure exactly how it should be worded – should we be saying in a personal life section "Havig is a Mormon" with the 1967 reference, or should we say something different or not list it since it is only known that he was a Mormon 50+ years ago?
Ref spot check: 6, 7, 12, 16, 21, 25, 27

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:40, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:44, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Maybe you could say Havig was born on May 6, 1949, in Powell, Wyoming, and raised as a Mormon? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:51, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Gonzo fan2007: Added. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:56, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:57, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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