User:ReyBrujo/Overhauls
| Overhauls | ||||
| 2006 05-20 | Goldmoon | b | a | d |
| 2006 05-28 | Riverwind | b | a | d |
| 2006 06-04 | Sturm Brightblade | b | a | d |
| 2006 08-22 | Genesis LPMud | b | a | d |
| 2006 08-28 | Contact | b | a | d |
After spending quite a lot of time creating some articles and cleaning up others, I decided that completing articles was as important as creating them. So, starting on May 20, 2006, I began focusing on a single article until it was well written. My first attempt was with Goldmoon, but the version I thought to be good was basically against the fiction guidelines. So, after understanding the guidelines, and reading Uncle G and BrianSmithson's essays, I rewrote it. Thanks go to BrianSmithson for the tips and his peer review about the article.
After finishing with Goldmoon, I decided to continue with Riverwind, since most of the sources were similar and I had fresh memories after fetching the information for Goldmoon's article. This time, it took only a day to get it to a better shape, mostly because I knew since the beginning how to focus on it.
Sturm Brightblade was a long article, but it described Sturm Brightblade as a living person. I modified it keeping only one section of the original one about his weapon. Now it is a more compact and encyclopedic entry, but it is quite different from Goldmoon's entry. I wonder which one is better? Guess a peer review will solve that question.
After some time, I decided to improve Genesis LPMud. This is not based directly in Dragonlance literature, it was a good break to prevent burning myself out.