User talk:Bluedog02
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Sterna25 (talk) 15:27, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
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[edit]Hello, Bluedog02, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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Peer Review
[edit]I think everything in the sandbox so far looks good. All the sections headings are appropriate and well developed. Under the Family Life section specifically, where it says "her mother's mother, and her mother's 4 siblings were driven from their home in Turkey after her mother's father", I think you can say her grandmother and her grandfather for a better read. Also the section under education may be fitting under medical career.--Turtle002 (talk) 15:34, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
Missing Lead section
[edit]Hi! Nice work with your article. One concern is that your article lacks a lead section. A Wikipedia article is supposed to start with a lead section that summarizes all the major points of the article. It should generally open with something like Article title is... and go on to succinctly say what the topic is in the opening sentence. The remainder of the lead needs to summarize all the major points of the article, in proportion to the way they're covered in the body of the article. Nothing should be in the lead that's not discussed in more depth in the article body. If you have a look at pages 7-9 in the Editing Wikipedia brochure which I have linked to here, you can learn more about article layout.Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 01:20, 1 December 2022 (UTC)